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[Writing] giving grades to students is good or not? A thought-provoking current issue concerns that grades are only way for students to understand how well they are doing and the only way to motivate them to work harder. However, some people believe that giving grades create a needlessly competitive environment and make students feel like they are only valued for their academic. Therefore, It is timely to consider the validity of this perspective.. 2023. 11. 9.
[Writing] AI 관련 장점 Artificial Intelligence can accelerate to the extent of genres' development like biotic, medical, and automatic. This is because AI that can display second only to humans abilities doesn't feel exhaustion, and even never stop labor until shutting down the program by workers. Furthermore, this advanced science also allows people to focus on the importance of tasks that they should take away from .. 2023. 11. 9.
[Writing] Artificial Intelligences is good or not? A thought-provoking current issue concerns that AI has the potential to solve many of the world’s problems, from climate change to disease. However, some people believe that AI become automated, leaving people without work. Therefore, it is timely to consider the validity of this perspective. In the following sections, I will present my reasons for strongly agreeing with the statement. First and.. 2023. 11. 8.
[Writing] 중독 관련된 이유 중독. Dopamine, the brain is governed by a reward system, and sometimes this plays a role in giving confidence and motivation for success. On the other hand, if the brain only yearns for compensation, those people who give in to dopamine can’t discern between right and wrong. 꼭 외우기 2023. 11. 8.
[Writing] Integrated task chapter 1 In the given set of material, the reading passage and the lecture deal with whether music education which is compulsory in American high school is good for students or not. The author of the reading believes that the high school music class actually has problems and only a few students who own talent in music can get high grades. whereas, the lecture argues against it by providing two compelling.. 2023. 11. 8.
[Writing] WR what factors do you think have contributed to the increase in life expectancy? A thought-provoking current issue concerns that the principal opinion for longevity is that technological developments enable humans not to utilize their bodies much time anymore. However, some people believe that medical technology has certainly played a role, and improvements in government services have been just as important. Therefore, It is timely to consider the validity of this perspectiv.. 2023. 11. 7.
[Writing] Become addicted 관련된 의제, 도파민 Dopamine, the brain can be governed by a reward system. sometimes this plays a role, giving confidence and motivation for success. On the other hand, If the brain only yearns for compensation, those people who give in to dopamine can't judge decisions correctly like morality, sin, and crime. Furthermore, dopamine enables people to hanker for remuneration repeatedly, they cannot stop their curren.. 2023. 11. 7.
[Writing] WR what do you think, Does social media cause more harm than good? 158자 A thought-provoking current issue concerns that social media has caused more harm than good. However, some people believe that social media has mostly improved society. Therefore, It is timely to consider the validity of this perspective. In the following sections, I will present my reasons for strongly disagreeing with the statement. First and foremost, social media is possible to be an ad.. 2023. 11. 6.