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Topic: 학교에서 8~13세의 학우에게 사교육을 제한하는것에 대해 어떻게 생각하는가? 357자 An ongoing debate exists over whether the extracurricular constraint policy is good for students or not. I firmly feel that extracurriculars would be beneficial rather than another choice. Because extracurriculars can fill their empty part of knowledge. And they can learn the kind of activities which students want. First of all, extracurricu..

QA. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world 가상세계에서 서로를 이해함으로써 인종차별을 줄일수 있따→ 학원을 다닐필요 없다, 돈 주고 무언가를 교육 받을 필요성이 없다, 공정해진다. 다양한 정보를 빠르게 공유할 수 있다. 237자 An ongoing debate exists over whether widespread use of the internet effect on positive life or not. I firmly feel that using internect w..

topic: Some would prefer to start working on a presentation as soon as it is assigned. Other people would rather wait until they have the perfect idea for it. Which do you prefer? 의견: 전자를 선택 1. 회의장에서 나와, 자신의 할일을 하는것이 먼저 -> 나중에 전체 일정에 영향을 주니까 2. 밖에나가서 차라리 쉬던가, 커피마신던가함 -> 창의적인 생각은 갑작스러운 순간에 나오니까. as far as I am I can remember, people have been debating the pros and cons of leaving the place versus..

topic: 학생이 수업에 강제적으로 참여되야하는가? my Opinions : 그러하다. 353 자 First of all, attending classes can greatly benefit students. By attending classes, they can accumulate knowledge and broaden their backgrounds. Additionally, they can learn logical thinking skills and practice problem-solving, which are essential skills in today's job market. Many companies require employees to be self-sufficient and able ..

Topic : Sports vs Library 273 자 First of all, Exercising can lead people to reduce stress. To be specific, when people work out, the blood in the body begins to circuit more than faster to supply blood to their brain. as the same time, this phenomenon makes the endorphins in their body. Additionally, this sort of part enables them to reduce someone’s stress which is exercising, like pouring out ..

Taking risks can lead to greater life for people. Specifically, there is a common principle that in order to gain something, people often have to make sacrifices and take risks because the principle of risk and return applies to various aspects of life. Likewise, someone invests in a company to be super rich or the other study to get academic achievement for long periods of time by taking risks ..

First of all, failure helps people to choose proper selections. Specifically, when people try to challenge what they want, they will undergo a lot of failures. they will think about what the problem is, and why was wrong about their selected options. Therefore these thinking processes will give some clues. thereby they realize the solutions and progressing the situation. For example, when I was ..

Why do people go to museums? (사람들이 박물관 왜감-?) 이유: First of all, museums offer a wealth of knowledge. Visitors can gain a deeper understanding of art by reading the explanations provided next to the artifacts and pictures, or by picking up brochures. In addition, curators who have numerous knowledge regarding a piece of work make it easy for visitors to understand the exhibits by providing hourly ..

Book vs Experience (책 또는 직접 경험 중 뭐가 더 좋은가?) Choice: Book First of all, Reading a book is cheap and affordable as an aspect of cost-effectiveness. In other words, People can simply get books in the library, bookstore, and Internet. also, using the Internet or library doesn't have to pay for getting some sources, as they served materials for free. Secondly, Saving time would be possible by studyin..

- this, that, you, but, however, I, me, mind, it , we, us 쓰지말고 - 관계대명사는 that는 가급적 줄이고 who, which를 많이 사용할것. - can know -> 이건 외국인이 안쓰는 표현임 recognize 이런걸로 바꿔서 사용할것 - and가 맨앞에 나와서 문장잇는 방법 쓰지말고 - 접속사 두개도 같이쓰면 안된다 and sometimes 이런거. - 쉽게 - 단어 어렵지 않으면서 같은 단어 반복하지말고 다른 단어 사용 - 가급적이면 비교급 쓰지말것 - if 문은 딱 한번만 사용할것 - 추상적인 개념은 쓰지말것, 인간은 사회적인 동물이다.. 이런거 - 자기가 정한것에 대해 pros, positive한것만 적는것이 좋다. 반대의견이 안좋아서 이게좋다...