[Writing] 05/01/2023 Toefl Essay 2개

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Why do people go to museums? (사람들이 박물관 왜감-?)

 

이유: 
First of all, museums offer a wealth of knowledge. Visitors can gain a deeper understanding of art by reading the explanations provided next to the artifacts and pictures, or by picking up brochures. In addition, curators who have numerous knowledge regarding a piece of work make it easy for visitors to understand the exhibits by providing hourly explanations. When I was young, I visited museums near my downtown as part of a summer vacation assignment and was able to learn a great deal of information about history.

Secondly, visiting museums can inspire creativity and imagination. When people view artifacts and artwork, they often have questions and are curious about why ancestors and artists created the product in a certain way. Through this process of arousing skepticism and curiosity, they can stimulate their creativity and imagination. As the famous philosopher Balthazar Gracian once said, 'Doubt is the virtue of a wise man; it is a very useful attribute in life.' Therefore, visiting museums can encourage creativity and imagination.

 

 

 

 

Eat out or Eat at home (외식이냐, 집밥이냐?)

 

Choice: Eat at home

이유: 
First of all, Eating at home serve safe food. Specifically, people can eat fresh meals by cooking themselves directly. Additionally, those need to buy some materials to cook the dish in the grocery market, then they can check the price tag and ingredients labeling, thereby they figure out and picking up the recently harvested fresh component. therefore it can allow consumers to ingest safe food. For example, when I was a university student, I lived alone in a rooftop house. I often had been experienced stomachaches when I eat takeout food. thus I tried to buy some materials for cooking at home in the grocery. after cooking myself in my home, there isn't an occurrence of stomachache until now.

Secondly, homemade food brings happiness by creating a comfortable atmosphere. People feel a sense of discomfort and nervousness when they are surrounded by noise and disturbances. Eating at home allows people to enjoy the meal alone or with just a few people, which reduces the noise and creates a quiet mood, thereby reducing stress. For instance, when I was young, I always felt stressed and unhappy because I didn't like the noise and hubbub of my classmates during lunchtime. Therefore, I would take my food outside to eat, and as a result, my stress was diminished, and my mood improved.
 

 

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